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Form freak

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Form Freak
By skypirate10
(girl into fox)

Claire was a beautiful girl, she had a perfect figure, she was average height, under weight, and looked like she belonged on the front of a magazine. She was 16 and had deep green eyes and midnight black hair. And she was always looking for ways to make herself look better.

Her bathroom was filled with every brand of shampoo and conditioner you could name, and then some. She tried all kinds of skin-care products and soaps, each one with it’s own special ingredients to ‘bring out your loveliness’.

Her parents tried to exploit her beauty to the fullest. They entered her in young adult level beauty contests to earn cash. She always won them.

Today she was heading out the door with the credit card her mother got her in hand, ready to go shopping for more products, when she saw a package on the doorstep. Curios as to what it was, she picked it up and took it with her to her car. The note on top read; Claire:
         I don’t particularly like you,
         You were given natural beauty
         And yet you squander it with
         Pathetic skin products. Nevertheless,
         This gift should please you.
         The Illusionist

“Hmm… typical of Chris to insult me.” She said. Chris was a boy at school who called himself ‘The Illusionist’. Normally he kept to himself, but he seemed to be particularly bitter towards Claire. She opened the gift, figuring it would be dead flowers or something, but was surprised to find a pretty crystal bottle with a turquoise blue liquid in it. Attached was a card that said it was ‘vixen form potion’ and it would make the drinker beautiful in figure and appearance.

“Yeah right!” Claire said. “Of all things, beauty in a bottle! Chris has blown his top!” In all honesty, the bottle really gave her the creeps, she swore for a moment she could see an evil green eye stare at her from in the liquid.

“OK Claire, focus, you are not crazy,” She told herself, “This is just some dumb twerps’ idea of a joke. As a matter of fact, I’ll prove the guy’s lying and drink it!” She struggled, removing the top was more difficult than it appeared, amazing how tight the seal was. Finally it gave way, and she drank it down without hesitation. Immediately, she gagged, it was more bitter than anything she had ever tasted.



“So that was his scheme,” she choked out, “to try and kill me with the stuff!” She put the car in gear and started driving to the mall. During the drive, her ears slipped up the side of her head, becoming pointed in the process. A line connected her nose and upper lip, much like a cats’ or vixens’.

When she parked in the lot, she went to open the door and after doing so screamed at the sight of her hand. It was covered in black fur, and her fingernails had sharpened into claws. “What is that!?” she exclaimed on seeing the fur, but what scared her more was the fur was spreading up her arm, changing from black to red.

Then she looked in her rear-view and saw her ears and face. Her ears were on top of her head and they looked like a vixen’s, they were covered in red and black fur. Her nose was black and pushing out with her face to form a muzzle. She opened her mouth to scream again, but she could no longer make human sounds. It also revealed several new pointed teeth.

The fur spread to cover her body. It was mostly red, with black on her feet, arms, muzzle, and the points of her ears. Her belly fur was white. A small tail poked out from her spine, but it quickly grew out into a bushy red fox tail with a white tip. Pads appeared on her palms and feet, her toenails grew to claws like her fingers, her legs became hind legs and her arms became more suited as front legs. Her spine bent and cracked, forcing her to go to all fours in her cramped car.

Her hair fell out, and then she started to shrink, her form changing as she did so. When the shrinking stopped, she crawled out from under her clothes and looked at herself. She now appeared to be a vixen in every way, but climbing up to her mirror, she realized her eyes were the same.

Inside Claire screamed at herself, outside she cries and shook. “Heh heh heh… so you drank it, did you?” asked an ominous and bitter voice.

“Where are you?” Claire said in her mind, she looked for a source of the voice, but there wasn’t one.

“I’m not here, as you can see. But anyways, I can’t believe you fell for that! I mean, ‘vixen form potion’? How much more obvious could I get!” said the ownerless voice.

“Chris? You did this to me?” she asked.

“Of course I did it to you, you moron!” the voice scolded angrily, “and by the way, even though I am Chris, in my current form I go by The Illusionist.”

“But why did you do it?” she sobbed.

“Because I hate people who spoil Gifts!” said The Illusionist, “and I just gave you a gift of my own. You are no ordinary vixen, I equipped you with venom sacs! One bite and the victim will take on a condition similar to yours.”

“Why would I do that!” she screamed at him.

“When the time comes, you won’t have a choice.” The Illusionist said, “Now run along, I have better things to do with my time than talk to my victims.” And then his voice vanished, he was done talking.

She sobbed, knowing her former life of beauty was over. Claire jumped out of her car and ran off to the city park, knowing that with her new body, it was the only place she could make a home.  

THE END?
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Nickhill123's avatar
I wha make that potion how do I make it plz tell me plz